updated verbiage to reflect suggestions from the team

projects/account/src/app/modules/dashboard/components/dashboard-device/dashboard-device.component.html

@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@
     </mat-card-header>
     <mat-card-content>
         <p class="mat-body">
-            You just got your new device with Mycroft installed.  Congratulations!  Pairing your
+            You just got a new Mycroft device.  Congratulations!  Pairing your device with
-            device with Mycroft's servers provides you with instant access to software updates,
+            Mycroft's servers provides you with instant access to software updates, speech
-            speech transcription, weather and other services.
+            transcription, weather, answers to general queries, and other services.
         </p>
     </mat-card-content>
     <mat-card-actions>

projects/account/src/app/modules/dashboard/components/dashboard-marketplace/dashboard-marketplace.component.html

@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@
     </mat-card-header>
     <mat-card-content>
         <p class="mat-body">
-            Mycroft devices include pre-installed essential skills like Timers, Alarms
+            Mycroft devices include pre-installed essential Skills like Timers, Alarms and News.
-            and News.  There are many other skills available built by the Mycroft team or
+            There are many other Skills available built by the Mycroft team or our developer
-            our developer community. Skills can be fun (ISS Tracker), informational
+            community. Skills can be fun (ISS Tracker), informational (National Parks), or
-            (National Parks), or useful (Home Assistant).
+            useful (Home Assistant).
         <p class="mat-body">
-            Visit the Marketplace for a list of Mycroft-approved skills.  To install,
+            Visit the Marketplace for a list of Mycroft-approved Skills.  To install,
-            say "Hey Mycroft, install" followed by the skill name.
+            say "Hey Mycroft, install" followed by the Skill name.
         </p>
     </mat-card-content>
     <mat-card-actions>

projects/account/src/app/modules/dashboard/components/dashboard-membership/dashboard-membership.component.html

@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@
     </mat-card-header>
     <mat-card-content>
         <p class="mat-body">
-            Your support makes a big difference.  Thanks to you and other Mycroft supporters,
+            Your support makes a big difference.  Thanks to you and other Mycroft supporters, we
-             we can continue building upon the Mycroft experience.  It is also motivating
+            can continue building upon the Mycroft experience.  It is also motivating knowing there
-            knowing there is a community of people who believe in the same things we do.
+            is a community of people who believe in the same things we do.
         </p>
     </mat-card-content>
 </mat-card>
@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@
     <mat-card-content>
         <p class="mat-body">
             Mycroft's voice assistant software is open source, which means it is free to use and
-            the underlying source code is available to the public.  Our entire platform is free
+            the underlying source code is available to the public.  Our entire platform is free of
-            of advertisements.  The data we collect, with your consent, is not sold to anyone.
+            advertisements.  The data we collect, with your consent, is not sold to anyone.
         <p class="mat-body">
             For less than one cup of coffee a month, you can help with the costs of our servers,
             services, and ongoing development.  All of which all improve Mycroft's performance

projects/account/src/app/modules/dashboard/components/dashboard-privacy/dashboard-privacy.component.html

@@ -5,9 +5,10 @@
     </mat-card-header>
     <mat-card-content>
         <p class="mat-body">
-            Mycroft only collects the personally identifiable information (PII) necessary to
+            Mycroft only collects the personally identifiable information (PII) necessary to deliver
-            deliver a quality user experience when interacting with the voice assistant.  Any
+            a quality user experience when interacting with the voice assistant.  Any PII we collect
-            PII we collect is stored securely on our servers.  It is not shared with anyone.
+            is stored securely on our servers.  It is not shared with anyone.
+
         <p class="mat-body">
             We continually investigate solutions to further minimize the PII we collect.  We
             also strive to be transparent about the data we do collect and why it is collected.

projects/account/src/app/modules/dashboard/components/dashboard-skill/dashboard-skill.component.html

@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@
     </mat-card-header>
     <mat-card-content>
         <p class="mat-body">
-            Some skills include settings that can change how the skill behaves or provide
+            Some Skills include settings that can change how the Skill behaves.  To change the
-            information to the skill that will improve the user experience.  To change the
+            settings of your Skills, for instance the sound of your alarm, go to Skill Settings.
-            settings of your skills, for instance the sound of your alarm, go to Skill Settings.
+
         </p>
     </mat-card-content>
     <mat-card-actions>

projects/account/src/app/modules/personal-data/personal-data.component.html

@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
         </mat-card-header>
         <mat-card-content>
             <p class="mat-body">
-                When you created this account, you provided your email address.  It is the method we
+                When you created this account, you provided your email address.  It is the method
-                use to identify users.  It is also used to send you confirmation messages when
+                we use to identify users.  It is also used to send you confirmation messages for
-                actions are taken against your account.  For example, a password reset request is
+                account updates, like password changes.  For example, a password reset request is
                 sent to this email address.
             <p class="mat-body">
                 We do not use your email address for marketing purposes, unless you used the same