updated verbiage to reflect suggestions from the team

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Chris Veilleux 2022-08-26 15:24:24 -05:00
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</mat-card-header>
<mat-card-content>
<p class="mat-body">
You just got your new device with Mycroft installed. Congratulations! Pairing your
device with Mycroft's servers provides you with instant access to software updates,
speech transcription, weather and other services.
You just got a new Mycroft device. Congratulations! Pairing your device with
Mycroft's servers provides you with instant access to software updates, speech
transcription, weather, answers to general queries, and other services.
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<mat-card-content>
<p class="mat-body">
Mycroft devices include pre-installed essential skills like Timers, Alarms
and News. There are many other skills available built by the Mycroft team or
our developer community. Skills can be fun (ISS Tracker), informational
(National Parks), or useful (Home Assistant).
Mycroft devices include pre-installed essential Skills like Timers, Alarms and News.
There are many other Skills available built by the Mycroft team or our developer
community. Skills can be fun (ISS Tracker), informational (National Parks), or
useful (Home Assistant).
<p class="mat-body">
Visit the Marketplace for a list of Mycroft-approved skills. To install,
say "Hey Mycroft, install" followed by the skill name.
Visit the Marketplace for a list of Mycroft-approved Skills. To install,
say "Hey Mycroft, install" followed by the Skill name.
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</mat-card-header>
<mat-card-content>
<p class="mat-body">
Your support makes a big difference. Thanks to you and other Mycroft supporters,
we can continue building upon the Mycroft experience. It is also motivating
knowing there is a community of people who believe in the same things we do.
Your support makes a big difference. Thanks to you and other Mycroft supporters, we
can continue building upon the Mycroft experience. It is also motivating knowing there
is a community of people who believe in the same things we do.
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<mat-card-content>
<p class="mat-body">
Mycroft's voice assistant software is open source, which means it is free to use and
the underlying source code is available to the public. Our entire platform is free
of advertisements. The data we collect, with your consent, is not sold to anyone.
the underlying source code is available to the public. Our entire platform is free of
advertisements. The data we collect, with your consent, is not sold to anyone.
<p class="mat-body">
For less than one cup of coffee a month, you can help with the costs of our servers,
services, and ongoing development. All of which all improve Mycroft's performance

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</mat-card-header>
<mat-card-content>
<p class="mat-body">
Mycroft only collects the personally identifiable information (PII) necessary to
deliver a quality user experience when interacting with the voice assistant. Any
PII we collect is stored securely on our servers. It is not shared with anyone.
Mycroft only collects the personally identifiable information (PII) necessary to deliver
a quality user experience when interacting with the voice assistant. Any PII we collect
is stored securely on our servers. It is not shared with anyone.
<p class="mat-body">
We continually investigate solutions to further minimize the PII we collect. We
also strive to be transparent about the data we do collect and why it is collected.

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Some skills include settings that can change how the skill behaves or provide
information to the skill that will improve the user experience. To change the
settings of your skills, for instance the sound of your alarm, go to Skill Settings.
Some Skills include settings that can change how the Skill behaves. To change the
settings of your Skills, for instance the sound of your alarm, go to Skill Settings.
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<p class="mat-body">
When you created this account, you provided your email address. It is the method we
use to identify users. It is also used to send you confirmation messages when
actions are taken against your account. For example, a password reset request is
When you created this account, you provided your email address. It is the method
we use to identify users. It is also used to send you confirmation messages for
account updates, like password changes. For example, a password reset request is
sent to this email address.
<p class="mat-body">
We do not use your email address for marketing purposes, unless you used the same