updated monitor package docs to address PR feedback

content/v2.0/reference/flux/functions/built-in/transformations/range.md

@@ -26,26 +26,24 @@ range(start: -15m, stop: now())
 ## Parameters
 
 ### start
-Specifies the oldest time to be included in the results.
+The earliest time to include in results.
+Use a relative duration or absolute time.
+For example, `-1h` or `2019-08-28T22:00:00Z`.
+Durations are relative to `now()`.
 
-Relative start times are defined using negative durations.
-Negative durations are relative to now.
-Absolute start times are defined using timestamps.
-
-_**Data type:** Duration or Timestamp_
+_**Data type:** Duration | Time_
 
 ### stop
-Specifies the newest time to be included in the results. Defaults to `now`.
+The latest time to include in results.
+Use a relative duration or absolute time.
+For example, `-1h` or `2019-08-28T22:00:00Z`.
+Durations are relative to `now()`.
+Defaults to `now()`.
 
-Relative stop times are defined using negative durations.
-Negative durations are relative to now.
-Absolute stop times are defined using timestamps.
-
-_**Data type:** Duration or Timestamp_
+_**Data type:** Duration | Time_
 
 {{% note %}}
-Flux only honors [RFC3339 timestamps](/v2.0/reference/flux/language/types#timestamp-format)
-and ignores dates and times provided in other formats.
+Time values in Flux must be in [RFC3339 format](/v2.0/reference/flux/language/types#timestamp-format).
 {{% /note %}}
 
 ## Examples

content/v2.0/reference/flux/functions/monitor/_index.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ weight: 202
 v2.0/tags: [functions, monitor, alerts, package]
 ---
 
-Monitor Flux functions provide tools for monitoring and alerting with InfluxDB.
+The Flux monitor package provides tools for monitoring and alerting with InfluxDB.
 Import the `influxdata/influxdb/monitor` package:
 
 ```js

content/v2.0/reference/flux/functions/monitor/check.md

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ---
 title: monitor.check() function
 description: >
-  The `monitor.check()` function performs a check against input data and assigns an `ok`,
-  `info`, `warn` or `crit`level to each row based on user-specified predicate functions.
+  The `monitor.check()` function function checks input data and assigns a level
+  (`ok`, `info`, `warn`, or `crit`) to each row based on predicate functions.
 menu:
   v2_0_ref:
     name: monitor.check
@@ -10,10 +10,8 @@ menu:
 weight: 202
 ---
 
-The `monitor.check()` function performs a check against input data and assigns an `ok`,
-`info`, `warn` or `crit` level to each row based on user-specified predicate functions.
-The function stores statuses in the `_level` column and writes all check results to the
-`statuses` measurement in the `_monitoring` bucket.
+The `monitor.check()` function function checks input data and assigns a level
+(`ok`, `info`, `warn`, or `crit`) to each row based on predicate functions.
 
 _**Function type:** Transformation_
 
@@ -30,6 +28,9 @@ monitor.check(
 )
 ```
 
+`monitor.check()` stores statuses in the `_level` column and writes results
+to the `statuses` measurement in the `_monitoring` bucket.
+
 ## Parameters
 
 ### crit
@@ -63,7 +64,7 @@ The message is stored in the `_message` column.
 _**Data type:** Function_
 
 ### data
-Data to append to the to output data.
+Data to append to the output.
 **InfluxDB populates check data.**
 
 _**Data type:** Object_

content/v2.0/reference/flux/functions/monitor/deadman.md

@@ -11,8 +11,7 @@ cloud_all: true
 ---
 
 The `monitor.deadman()` function detects when a group stops reporting data.
-It takes a stream of tables and reports which groups or series are
-observed before time `t`, but not after.
+It takes a stream of tables and reports if groups have been observed since time `t`.
 
 _**Function type:** Transformation_
 
@@ -23,8 +22,8 @@ monitor.deadman(t: -3m)
 ```
 
 `monitor.deadman()` retains the most recent row from each input table and adds a `dead` column.
-It sets `dead` to `true` if the record appears before time `t`.
-It sets `dead` to `false` if the group appears after time `t`.
+If a record appears **after** time `t`, `monitor.deadman()` sets `dead` to `false`.
+Otherwise, `dead` is set to `true`.
 
 ## Parameters
 

content/v2.0/reference/flux/functions/monitor/from.md

@@ -27,27 +27,24 @@ monitor.from(
 ## Parameters
 
 ### start
-The oldest time to include in results.
-
-Relative start times are defined using negative durations.
-Negative durations are relative to now.
-Absolute start times are defined using timestamps.
+The earliest time to include in results.
+Use a relative duration or absolute time.
+For example, `-1h` or `2019-08-28T22:00:00Z`.
+Durations are relative to `now()`.
 
 _**Data type:** Duration | Time_
 
 ### stop
-The newest time to include in the results.
+The latest time to include in results.
+Use a relative duration or absolute time.
+For example, `-1h` or `2019-08-28T22:00:00Z`.
+Durations are relative to `now()`.
 Defaults to `now()`.
 
-Relative stop times are defined using negative durations.
-Negative durations are relative to now.
-Absolute stop times are defined using timestamps.
-
 _**Data type:** Duration | Time_
 
 {{% note %}}
-Flux only honors [RFC3339 timestamps](/v2.0/reference/flux/language/types#timestamp-format)
-and ignores dates and times provided in other formats.
+Time values in Flux must be in [RFC3339 format](/v2.0/reference/flux/language/types#timestamp-format).
 {{% /note %}}
 
 ### fn

content/v2.0/reference/flux/functions/monitor/logs.md

@@ -26,27 +26,24 @@ monitor.logs(
 ## Parameters
 
 ### start
-The oldest time to include in results.
-
-Relative start times are defined using negative durations.
-Negative durations are relative to now.
-Absolute start times are defined using timestamps.
+The earliest time to include in results.
+Use a relative duration or absolute time.
+For example, `-1h` or `2019-08-28T22:00:00Z`.
+Durations are relative to `now()`.
 
 _**Data type:** Duration | Time_
 
 ### stop
-The newest time to include in the results.
+The latest time to include in results.
+Use a relative duration or absolute time.
+For example, `-1h` or `2019-08-28T22:00:00Z`.
+Durations are relative to `now()`.
 Defaults to `now()`.
 
-Relative stop times are defined using negative durations.
-Negative durations are relative to now.
-Absolute stop times are defined using timestamps.
-
 _**Data type:** Duration | Time_
 
 {{% note %}}
-Flux only honors [RFC3339 timestamps](/v2.0/reference/flux/language/types#timestamp-format)
-and ignores dates and times provided in other formats.
+Time values in Flux must be in [RFC3339 format](/v2.0/reference/flux/language/types#timestamp-format).
 {{% /note %}}
 
 ### fn

content/v2.0/reference/flux/functions/monitor/notify.md

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ A function that constructs and sends the notification to an endpoint.
 _**Data type:** Function_
 
 ### data
-Data to append to output data.
+Data to append to the output.
 **InfluxDB populates notification data.**
 
 _**Data type:** Object_