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/**
* Representation of a GATT service discovered.
*
* GATT Services are discovered on distant GATT servers by the discovery
* procedure which can be initiated by calling
* The discovery procedure discovers GATT Services are discovered on distant
* GATT servers, which can be initiated by calling
* GattClient::launchServiceDiscovery() or GattClient::discoverServices(). The
* discovery process will pass instances of this class to the callback handling
* discovery process passes instances of this class to the callback handling
* service discovered.
*
* Discovered services are characterized by the UUID of the service discovered
* and the range of the GATT attributes belonging to the service.
*
* The UUID can be queried by calling getUUID() while the begining of the
* attribute range can be obtained via getStartHandle() and the end of the
* attribute range can be obtained through getStartHandle() and the end of the
* attribute range with a call to getEndHandle().
*
* The characteristics composing the service may be discovered by the function
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/**
* Construct a DiscoveredService instance.
*
* @important This API is not meant to be used publicly it is meant to be
* used by internal APIs of mbed BLE.
* @important This API is not meant to be used publicly. It is meant to be
* used by internal APIs of Mbed BLE.
*/
DiscoveredService() :
uuid(UUID::ShortUUIDBytes_t(0)),
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/**
* Set information about the discovered service.
*
* @important This API is not meant to be used publicly it is meant to be
* used by internal APIs of mbed BLE.
* @important This API is not meant to be used publicly. It is meant to be
* used by internal APIs of Mbed BLE.
*
* @param[in] uuidIn The UUID of the discovered service.
* @param[in] startHandleIn The start handle of the discovered service in
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/**
* Set the start and end handle of the discovered service.
*
* @important This API is not meant to be used publicly it is meant to be
* used by internal APIs of mbed BLE.
* @important This API is not meant to be used publicly. It is meant to be
* used by internal APIs of Mbed BLE.
*
* @param[in] startHandleIn The start handle of the discovered service in
* the peer's GATT server.
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/**
* Set the long UUID of the discovered service.
*
* @important This API is not meant to be used publicly it is meant to be
* used by internal APIs of mbed BLE.
* @important This API is not meant to be used publicly. It is meant to be
* used by internal APIs of Mbed BLE.
*
* @param[in] longUUID The bytes composing the long UUID of this discovered
* service.