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* Parameters defining the advertising process. * Parameters defining the advertising process.
* *
* Advertising parameters are a triplet of three value: * Advertising parameters are a triplet of three value:
* - The Advertising mode which is modeled after AdvertisingType_t. It defines * - The Advertising mode modeled after AdvertisingType_t. It defines
* if the device is connectable, scanable, ... This value can be set at * if the device is connectable and scannable. This value can be set at
* construction time, updated with setAdvertisingType() and queried by * construction time, updated with setAdvertisingType() and queried by
* getAdvertisingType(). * getAdvertisingType().
* - Time interval between advertisement. It can be set at construction time, * - Time interval between advertisement. It can be set at construction time,
* updated by setInterval() and obtained from getInterval(). * updated by setInterval() and obtained from getInterval().
* - Duration of the advertising process. As others it can be set at * - Duration of the advertising process. As others, it can be set at
* construction time, modified by setTimeout() and retrieved by getTimeout(). * construction time, modified by setTimeout() and retrieved by getTimeout().
*/ */
class GapAdvertisingParams { class GapAdvertisingParams {
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static const unsigned GAP_ADV_PARAMS_INTERVAL_MIN = 0x0020; static const unsigned GAP_ADV_PARAMS_INTERVAL_MIN = 0x0020;
/** /**
* Minimum Advertising interval for scannable and non-connectable * Minimum Advertising interval for scannable and nonconnectable
* undirected events in 625us units. * undirected events in 625us units.
* *
* @note Equal to 100ms. * @note Equal to 100ms.
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ADV_CONNECTABLE_UNDIRECTED, ADV_CONNECTABLE_UNDIRECTED,
/** /**
* Device is connectable and expect connection from a specific peer. * Device is connectable and expects connection from a specific peer.
* *
* @see Vol 3, Part C, Section 9.3.3 and Vol 6, Part B, Section 2.3.1.2. * @see Vol 3, Part C, Section 9.3.3 and Vol 6, Part B, Section 2.3.1.2.
*/ */
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/** /**
* Alias for GapAdvertisingParams::AdvertisingType_t. * Alias for GapAdvertisingParams::AdvertisingType_t.
* *
* @deprecated This type alias will be dropped in future releases. * @deprecated Future releases will drop this type alias.
*/ */
typedef enum AdvertisingType_t AdvertisingType; typedef enum AdvertisingType_t AdvertisingType;
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* @param[in] timeout Duration in seconds of the advertising process. A * @param[in] timeout Duration in seconds of the advertising process. A
* value of 0 indicate that there is no timeout of the advertising process. * value of 0 indicate that there is no timeout of the advertising process.
* *
* @note If value in input are out of range they will be normalized. * @note If value in input are out of range, they will be normalized.
*/ */
GapAdvertisingParams( GapAdvertisingParams(
AdvertisingType_t advType = ADV_CONNECTABLE_UNDIRECTED, AdvertisingType_t advType = ADV_CONNECTABLE_UNDIRECTED,
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AdvertisingType_t _advType; AdvertisingType_t _advType;
/** /**
* The advertising interval in ADV duration units (i.e. 0.625ms). * The advertising interval in ADV duration units (in other words, 0.625ms).
*/ */
uint16_t _interval; uint16_t _interval;